Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Overcast

Gray ice vapor lid 
clamped all round 
the rim of this earth bowl
sun is a nickel of iridescence
low in the southeast.
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  1. AnonymousNovember 29, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    I really like that the 'sun is a nickel of iridescence...' and think of just whose portrait it may hold - thanks, J

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  2. teriNovember 29, 2011 at 1:34 PM

    You must live right around the corner. I just observed a similar moment for my stone. My sun however was not an iridescent (boy that is a hard word to spell) disk. It was more a muffled dingy dime. As always enjoy your writing. xo teri

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