Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Sunrise Through a South Window Curtain

Brocaded burgundy intricacies 
surrender to brilliant backlight
reduced to tonal uniformity 
a new pattern forms of flaws
runs, slippages in the weave
thread barred golden radiance pours
through narrow vertical elliptics.


  1. Either way; flawed curtains or too much too much radiance for them to hold. All those lovely words filling up every flaw and fold- it fixes everything.

  2. Your wording suits the elegance of brocade and makes even the flaws exist as a unique beauty!